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Summerize impact of 'first contact'
[edit]The latter part of the second paragraph here Hawaii#First recorded contact (starting "These visitors introduced diseases ...") states that one effect of the contact was the decline in native population as a consequence of imported disease. Two immediate issues:
- the source cited (brittanica.com) makes no mention depopulation or disease
- another source (from US Congress) seems a political (non neutral) publication
Based on source 'Kuykendall' and a PDF already cited elsewhere the article (Native Hawaiian Population Enumerations), I have created an alternative few sentences which, I hope, give a description of the general impact, for good or bad, though still quoting that it was "a foreign invasion" (culturally and demographically). Thus:
"The impact of foreign visitors has been described as an “invasion” which “little by little overwhelmed the old culture of the islands”.[Kuykendall pg 12]. Native Hawaiians were vulnerable to Eurasian diseases for which they had less resistance.[citation needed] During the 1850s, measles killed a fifth of Hawaiʻi's people.[same citation as now]. Forty years after Cook’s arrival, it is estimated that the native population had declined by half and continued to decline throughout the 19th century. [Native Hawaiian Population Enumerations pdf] Meanwhile, the foreign resident population slowly grew; foreigners brought iron tools, manufactured items and household utensils; they also introduced firearms, alcohol, tobacco, livestock, non-native plants, and, inadvertently, insects previously unknown to Hawaii such as mosquitos.[Kuykendall pgs 26-28]"
I am hoping some other editor can find a source for the statement about native Hawaiians being vulnerable to Eurasian diseases. Objections or other feedback? Jp2207 (talk) 00:51, 18 January 2025 (UTC)
- Done (slightly modified from the text I had proposed). Jp2207 (talk) 21:45, 21 January 2025 (UTC)
Please mention it being the latest state.
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On August 12, 1959, Hawaii became the 50th US state, and there hasn't been any US state since. OfficialWatchOS7 (talk) 12:41, 11 March 2025 (UTC)
Add in the history the Land Reform Act of 1967 and the 1984 Supreme Court decision
[edit]After extensive hearings in the mid-1960s, the Hawaii legislature discovered that while Federal and State governments owned nearly 49 percent of the land in Hawaii, another 47 percent was owned by only 72 private landowners. To combat this concentration of ownership, the legislature enacted the Land Reform Act of 1967. The Act adopted a method of redistribution in which title in real property could be taken from lessors and transferred to lessees. Frank E. Midkiff, a landholder, challenged the Act.
Ref: https://www.oyez.org/cases/1983/83-141 Wtambellini (talk) 22:52, 24 March 2025 (UTC)
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Please add to the history section the Land Reform Act of 1967 and the US Supreme Court decision of 1984 (see ref).
Ref: https://www.oyez.org/cases/1983/83-141
"After extensive hearings in the mid-1960s, the Hawaii legislature discovered that while Federal and State governments owned nearly 49 percent of the land in Hawaii, another 47 percent was owned by only 72 private landowners. To combat this concentration of ownership, the legislature enacted the Land Reform Act of 1967. The Act adopted a method of redistribution in which title in real property could be taken from lessors and transferred to lessees." Wtambellini (talk) 22:58, 24 March 2025 (UTC)
- I'll leave it to someone else to decide whether to include mention of the act and subsequent court decision, but I'll note here that the proposed wording is an exact copy of the text at the provided oyez.org source. @Wtambellini: all edits to Wikipedia articles have to be written in your own words. You'll have a better chance of having your request implemented if you summarize reliable sources (and include something about the Supreme Court decision). DrOrinScrivello (talk) 15:54, 25 March 2025 (UTC)
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